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Winter
WinterAs winters icy fingers spread their chill,And send these shivers racing long my spine,The comfort of your love must warm me still,And blanket me within a calm divine.The sun so burdened strives...
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little things first....If you are going to ellide 'along' (and I don't recommend it), you need an apostrophe.'calm divine' is a modifier modifying a modifier... you need an noun in there somewhere.'so...
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